All Comments on 'My Boy Friend's Back'

How about another 750 word followup. Great short story.

A loving wife in the "Loving Wives" category? Shocking. *****

Just what every Jody deserves. No need for a part 2, we get the picture.

Please consider an editor

Funny! 4*

Nice, well done.

Cute. I liked it,

Top of the line for a short one. D

Why would a Marine wear his dress blues for this?

Short and sweet, loved it.

Nice. Couple’s not falling for the bs. We need more stories like this.

Um. Yeah

So what happen and where’s the rest of the story!

A short and to the point funny tale. It would be even better to see the outcome. 5*

so refreshing to see that there are real loving wives out there

i hate cheaters with a passion so this story gives me hope that there are still women and men that stay true to their spouses

thank you for this story

5* a full blown hard on and a tingling in my balls

Cute.

A little less cute and a bit more editing would have made it much better.

Awesome little story with a plan against the wrecking predator. Maybe he gets to enjoy the rest of his meals through a straw.

she set him up i love it

Time for Lyle to think about taking that permanent vacation. Well, it might be a little bit late for that. And a true loving wife as well. Keep polishing your style, you have promise. 4☆

You really need an editor. You have missing words, misspellings, and lack of punctuation.

Hahahaha. 4* for the attempt.

Meh, a big nothing burger, just written to make a play on words with the song.

Stupid plot on Lyle's part and the writing sucked.

FTDS...I wanted to see the guy get fucked up

I think waif hit the nail on the head.

It was okay, but still pretty rough and unfinished. It's not a 750 word challenge story, so no reason not to flesh it out better and there's never a good reason to rush to publish without an editor, or at least a proofreader, going over it.

Good story, thank you for sharing. Proofreading would help but I still gave you 5 stars ⭐️

Keep up the good work!

Ohhhh Shittttt Good tale, I guess ole Lyle is going to get his ass kicked.

You set the stage but then it stopped. I think it needed to be finished and not just left to our imaginations. Story Tellers need a beginning, middle and ending. Thus only a 3*.

Kind of cute, maybe, but mostly lame. So what is her husband going to do, beat his ass at the front door, on camera? And he's supposed to be a Marine? Why not just arrange to meet him somewhere remote and private, beat the dog shit out of him in complete disguise, take his wallet and valuables, and leave him to be found whenever by whoever? Just another mugging; so sad. Yeah, not a very intelligent plot. Cute song, dumb story.

5 for the song.

Nice story. The flow was fine, but the the writing mechanics were distracting. Gave the story four stars.

Clean up the mechanics will help earn the fifth star.

Good story, but let us know how long Lyle was in the hospital.

You did to the song what I hope the Marine husband will do to Lyle.

Cut to Mr. T growling PAIN!

Cute take on adapting the song, but you REALLY need to either get an editor or do a better job of proofreading yourself, because the errors are affecting the story... and the scoring.

“I have saw” ??

We got on a friend because he fucked the wife of military while he was deployed. Each time he took her ass and every other perverse way you could fuck . It’s just night right to persue a married woman

bye lyle, bye lyle, your ass is dead.

Cute.

And the gates of Hell opened up.

Loved the use of a song from my early teens to make a BTB story. A good 4 star story.