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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Amazing!

I really enjoyed your story. It took a direction that I did not expect at all.

I think that somewhere towards the end, maybe you could've reiterated that not all white girls are BBC fiends.

But it was really good, and I'm happy Damien got a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Cute, but ...

It would have been better to have her keep the baby. She's just that fucked up.

Good story, otherwise.

LightChaserALightChaserA20 days ago

Never thought it was such a good story

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