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LightChaserALightChaserAabout 1 month ago

Never thought it was such a good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Cute, but ...

It would have been better to have her keep the baby. She's just that fucked up.

Good story, otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing!

I really enjoyed your story. It took a direction that I did not expect at all.

I think that somewhere towards the end, maybe you could've reiterated that not all white girls are BBC fiends.

But it was really good, and I'm happy Damien got a happy ending.

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