All Comments on 'My Boys Ch. 02'

While the whole story flowed beautifully and was extremely well written form the female characters perspective…this jumping Jack relationships and the fact that the female acted as a female(wanting everything and not being sure what she actually wanted) sorta pulled the overall story down to a 4

A wonderful, loving erotic story.

1 star - not just no, but HELL NO.

This is just one more female wish list fantasy - to selfishly have everything they want - well, real life does not work that way.

One person is always left out of a triangle relationship and this story proved that point. It was a waste of time for either Mark or Tim to continue - they both should have dumped the skanky slut and moved on to find someone devoted exclusively to them or just not ever getting married.

One of the best written stories I've ever read on Literotica, and that doesn't even include the sex.

Well written story.

Another silly polyamory story. Like extra terrestrials and cucks there may be some out there, but I’ve never encountered this in real life.

It was good to see the right guy ended up with the girl, I just wish the boy had been his instead.

Writing was okay. The storyline and premise was lousy.

Brie is a selfish bitch .

Mark is a moron for marrying a woman knowing he was her second choice.

Tim is a bigger moron for being with woman who has shown that. When he is out of sight his out of mind.

The poly sort of dirties the water, it does add a nice twist to the two boy and a girl growing up genre not my cuppa really as for me its an indication of the woman just being rather immature - cake and eat it style. But hey its your yarn so power to you.

More interesting is your writing is rather captivating and it has a pleasant flow, I think splitting the submission took a lot away from a smoother whole, as I almost did not read your conclusion. Thanks.

Very nicely done.

I liked it, I’m generally not into the polyamorous relation stories, but this was nice, it worked for me. Thanks for your time and effort. KS

Great story 🙂 I liked that it has a realistic ending - because most throuples (not all, but most) do fall apart after a number of years.

And it was a beautiful ending, everyone moving on and gently dealing with their feelings.

Great story, love seeing a happy story involving poly people.

Interesting!

4

Awful stupid people who play games with parenthood.

Crazy. Interesting but lots of internal contradictions in the characters. Mark is a narcissist and is self absorbed but somehow gracious and magnanimous to sacrifice his personal happiness and marriage for Tim and Brie. Huh? He wants a kid to leave his mark (pun intended) but is best man at Brie's New marriage to Tim. He is now the boyfriend but fades to black and doesn't parent his son. Yet he is selfless about the decision yo divorce. Tim is of course the better fit as a husband but Brie has intense feelings for both though she finally recognizes that Tim is the better husband. It isn't hard to see why she fell so hard again for Tim. But why did she ever really love Mark and his inability to stay faithful. Mark seemed like an egotistical charmer and money maker. I get that he was her natural choice after Tim disappeared but why did a he say in that marriage. It was on-sided open. Wth? Peculiar. Tim is the only one who is blameless except I am stunned he didn't get more possessive after the divorce was finalized. Strange. 5 stars just for the insanity.

Excellent storey, so well written, I could feel the emotion. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Sorry couldn’t finish reading it⭐️

You got a lot of criticism from some of the comments. I thought I could see a lot of real life tendencies in the way some acted and the plot played out. I thought it was a good story. Thanks for the read.

Really great story!

Seems likely to be somewhat true, maybe.

No es lo mío, gracias por nada

That is the stupidest shit I've ever read

This stupid story is why I wont read any of your other stories.

Only a cuck would enjoy this