All Comments on 'My Brother, My Tormentor'

Well thought out story

Quit reading when she's trying to ride someone who has a broken pelvis.

So tired of the tree trunk for a cock, beach ball sized boobs stories. Who actually wants that? Sheesh.

Quit reading after the 12inch cock !

you tried to do way to much and then added too much bull crap . no supplements make a 3.5 increase in length over a couple of months... you seem like a person who watches way to many porn vids and has no clue about human anatomy or broken bones.

Besides the previously mentioned horse cocks and way oversized tits, this story could've really been shortened to 2-3 pages max. It was extremely redundant. Wake up, eats her, cum denies him for a week to maybe let him cum once and restart whole thing the next page

pegging (untagged) on page one was a surprise, and not in a good way. Blech.

I was hoping that mom would catch you two. However, the story was great but there was a lot towards the end.