All Comments on 'My Brother's College Friends'

Decent story, but pick a tense. This keeps switching between past and present tense. Most stories are of someone telling something that happened before, so past is more natural. Present is harder to maintain.

For those that liked the story, thank you. This was one of my earliest stories and now rereading it there are some errors I wish I could have fixed before publishing. In the end, this is not a romance piece - it was a creative expression of finding desire where you least expect it. I hope you enjoy it.