All Comments on 'My Brother's Kitten Pt. 01'

Hmmm….if and when he dumps you, you’ll make a terrific sex slave. Submissive women are the best. Looking forward to more.

Fantastic first story posted here! Very well written, well paced, great dialogue and action. I love every bit of it and already look forward to the next chapter! Thank you very much, Catie!

He's a fucking psychopath

Promising start. Next part?

No aftercare

That was fun! She is going to be a good cum dump for him.

Seriously? Fourteen people favorites? Mutually pushing sexual limits maybe but not really interested in pushing limits of ill use or humiliation.

A tale that has been brewing for a long long time. Finally consummated and knowingly dissatisfied . . .

Nothing unexpected, just falling short on quite a few angles, all his angles!

Looking forward for part two

Thank you for sharing, very erotic

Good luck to Kitten and Danny

Your a amazing writer

Thanks for sharing

Michael

Nicely written. I enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you.

Thanks Catie Neko, good one!

The violence was a surprise, but I guess it added simulation. It didn't last long, which was good.

I would have enjoyed more description. How did Kitten look when he was above her? Long black hair? Short brown hair? I really liked the detail about her breasts.

Thanks again and -- on to Part 2!

Great beginning. The whole don't call me kitten thing worked out great. Reading of her meowing was hotter than I expected. No regrets.

Far too abusive. For potential readers, it gets much worse. This is not a love story.