All Comments on 'My Cuckold Wedding - Ch. 02'
by DerekGrant
- 19 Comments
Whackdoodle10 months agoWhat a waste of her time.
She would rather be with Gregg, so leave Mark and be with the man she adores so much that she would rather be with him than her fiancée.
It makes no sense to me that she could say she loves Mark considering how little she cares for him.
You wrote Mark to be a willing chuck; but that’s only because you’re a shitty author who can’t write actusl people.
Anonymous10 months agoAn old man who is a dog and two people who are naive into thinking that this is a normal situation. He knocks up one, moves on to this one and then what, a third? This is more like dogs in heat. Will the boss wants to use the boyfriend also?
hindsight202010 months agoWhy do writers not understand the need for tension in a story? Make the cuck too willing and there is ZERO tension and ZERO story.
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Anonymous10 months agoWow that is fucked up. A skank whore wife to be fucking an arsehole bastard. And apparently the bitch loves her fiance. That is really fucked up. Any man with any pride or ego would dump all the skank bitches clothes on Gregs drive and then hand over everything to him and then tell all her family and friends and work colleagues about the relationship. As the marriage hasn't taken place yet get a refund on anything they spent and then the free man can live a happy life with someone that gives a shit about him.
Anonymous10 months agoYour writing is no piss poor that it literally is just words on a page.
Your protagonist has no motivation, no point in the story other than to be a raging slut and to humiliate the poor bastard she "loves". Mark may as well be dead and in fridge for all he contributes to the collection of word vomit that spewed from your keyboard in this failed missive.
Anonymous10 months agoA shared wife is hot. After the wedding they will discuss sleeping arrangements and who will be the father of her 1st baby. Keep going.
kumar_tamil2110 months agowooow,,,,,i hope it continues....
i read imagining this story as mother telling her son about her life incidents when her son asked her about their unusual relationship....
love it...
kumar_tamil2110 months agowooow,,,,,i hope it continues....
i read imagining this story as mother telling her son about her life incidents when her son asked her about their unusual relationship....
love it...
"your dad did not reply, but instead pushed his fingers inside the crotch of my panties, pushed it to one side to gain access to what nestled beneath. you dad's tender kiss on the fleshy pink lips of my labia was quickly followed by his tongue easing its way onto my aching vaginal entrance.
"Oh! That's so nice Mark," I quietly commented to your dad as I pressed the back of his head in towards my groin, "please don't stop."
"I love you Mary," was his muffled reply, "and I would do anything for you. You know that, Don't you?" your dad replied.....
Anonymous10 months agoI liked the story but I actually do prefer it when the wife is more dismissive and even degrading to the cuck. And as long as they’re still married the wife should continue to go after material things, expensive jewelry etc.,from the cucked hubby. He should understand that he absolutely needs to do those things if he wants the marriage to last. My unfaithful wife urges me to buy expensive things for her. After all , that’s why she married me. Sometimes when I think about how she manipulates me like that, I can’t help it..I start to get hard..
JT
Anonymous10 months agoSomething very hot with either getting dropped off, or even picked up at your boyfriends house. I actually like the consideration too, fooling around, but with a hall pass. Permitted, but also forbidden…
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Anonymous10 months agosuch BS. if two need a third to be happy they shouldn't be getting married to each other
Whiteboicuckie9 months agoI just love your story. Please continue with the wedding night and Gregg claimed the newly wed through the droit du segneur.
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