by Rustyoznail
1st time reading your stuff and it was really good. Highly improbable but very fun. I like that it was a somewhat realistic account of what the 2 girls where experiencing. Especially with the anticipation of Poppy and her dad maybe doing it. I actually signed my relief when her father backed away. I know alot of authors would have went there but you didn't. Well done. 5*
Brilliant
Rousing, sparkling wit, preposterous, hilarious.
'Lava lamp boobies'. A 1962 Vauxhall Velox. Shop-talk banter and tool-ambidexterity.
Bravo.
but so great.
I was a bit surprised that in spite of the title, you avoided incest...but you did not need it.