by Rabbitman55
Definitely the kind of story I love to read. Has everything ππππππππππππ can't wait the next chapter soon.πππππππππππ.
This series is the first of your work that I've read. Sure won't be the last, especially if you add to this one.
... to come. Hopefully.
I like it very much. Nice plot and I'm eager to read the next part.
This daddy and husband - mature and confident.
This has the beginnings of a great series. It well written and so much potential. Gets my 5 star vote. Look forward to the next and hopefully many chapters to follow in the future.
This is the start of yet another great series. You create dynamic characters and interactions. Can't wait for more!
Would love for Sharon to bring a family member into the mix, maybe a brother or mother who has just found out about her porn career and wants to get into the business as well.
Would love for you to build an incestuous families community involving Cathy and others working at that studio, with "Donna Spanx" moving over to Cathy's studio to be with "Lilly" and "Kitty Luv".
I loved the description of the studio and the action with the lights and all. I remember rehearsals when I was in my teens and twenties. brutal!
Fantastic. So hot. Hope this turns into a long series.
Watching wife/mother Anna, daddy/husband David and nasty slut daughter, Lindsey/AKA Donna Spanx partake in increasingly nasty and kinky variations of incestuous debauched sex, while continuing to build their porn empire, becoming the global leader in the porn industry, treating their staff and actors with respect and paying them well, inevitably dominating the market, to be the most popular studio in the world. Haha.
I hope you write more. Iβm loving this series. It makes me want to go back and continue my writing.
I never said this was a true story. It's fiction/fantasy. If you're looking for a realistic portrayal of the porn industry, go look for a tell all or a documentary. This is simply a fantasy of mine. I went to look at one of your stories, and, as I should have known, you haven't written a thing. So your criticism is pretty much worthless. Write something of your own, then talk. BTW I'm wondering how you would know so much about the realities of the porn industry. If you have such insight, you should write about it.
Thought it was well written and very entertaining, can't wait until the next part is out.
I wonder how many Daddys wish they were in this story.
Hope you decide to continue the story line.
Read it again, enjoyed it for the fun it was, changed my vote to 4/5
BTW have you seen the three docos βlife after porn?β
Suggest you do, it will explain to you the realities of porn from the horses mouth, both male and female. Some the past biggest stars too.
Do not forget Anastasia Knight, thatβs wha porn does to teenagers.
Wargamer: I'm not a documentarian. I'm just looking to have fun with this, share some of my fantasies, and write stories that hopefully other people will enjoy. I'm well aware of how rough life can be for young people working in porn (I remember the tragedy of Shana Grant back in the 80s), but what I write is fantasy. So please, don't try to compare what I write to real life. I don't actually know much about the real porn industry. It's all for fun.
I thought it was well written and many like the incest kink. What I couldn't get past was the long term cheating and betrayal of trust. In addition, both are skanks so who would want to be with them? It's like being married to two whores. Not my thing I guess.
No, your story is not funny, it's ugly. Mom and daughter porn actors, wife cheats on him for over two years and the cuckold has nothing better to do than fuck his daughter. Your protagonists belong in the loony bin or in jail!
What man wants to live with a porn actress unless it's her pimp!
The wife and daughter are ungrateful, disgusting pigs. The man is a worthless turd for believing everything is his fault. Heβs busting his ass every day to put a roof over their heads and food on their table and THATβS how they thank him? Heβs well within his rights to put a gun to their heads, pull the trigger and dump their lifeless corpses in the Glades for the gators to eat.