All Comments on 'My Descent into Slavery Ch. 04'

For some reason this chapter SEEMED a lot shorter than it was. Must be something along the lines of 'Time flies when you're having fun'. Maybe the theory of relatively. Or maybe just because I was waiting for it so much. Anyway, I'm already ready for more.

Another fabulous instalment thanks

The way you describe it, it seems this harsh treatment has a chance of being successful. Again, great writing!

I love this story!! I too anxiously check every day to see if there's a new installment. I'm a sucker for relationships working out and I'm so hoping Joshua and Beth will be back together again. I also wanted to tell you I think you write extremely wextremely well and I have now read everything you've posted on literatica

Still holding steady waiting impatiently for the next part of this story.

Sahar is just plan scary

Boy, that's harsh re-conditionING but looks as though Beth will make it. Another great instalment.

Sahar is to pain what Beth used to be to pleasure. Kind of an inverse psychology. Lovin it.