All Comments on 'My Destiny Ch. 01 Pt. 02'

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Nicole2023Nicole20233 months ago

I like the first chp as it was an interesting opening. This second one, the only highlight was the last page. A little forewarning for the incest, don’t care for it. Seems like sex just for the sake to have it in the story. I want to get to the part of meeting the parents but can do without sleeping with everyone.

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