All Comments on 'My EX - My Prisoner'

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d1rty0ldMan74 11 months ago

Nifty start. Looking forward to more.

Alf62 11 months ago

I enjoyed the storyline. Hopefully you write a sequel,since you left it open.

Anonymous11 months ago

it should be him serving time sadistic bastard

EmmesLust794 11 months ago

The story seemed to lose steam at the end.

whiterabbit0117 11 months agoAuthor

EmmesLust794about 3 hours ago

The story seemed to lose steam at the end.

Intentional as complacency replaces fear of being sent back. Now to see if the next chapter restores that driver and behavior, and perhaps takes it to a new or different level.

Whitewaterbum 11 months ago

I was hoping he would turn her into a pain slut. You kinda end it as a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship.

C_frommn 9 months ago

Yes the story lost a little something in the final page. but he never seemed to be a Dominant Male. Just someone getting even for past misdeeds

Anonymous8 months ago

I refer to my ex as the demon bitch & I wouldn’t treat her that bad.

vitaminx51 3 months ago

They act like strangers for almost the entire story. Given the title, one would expect more (ex) relationship dynamic.

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