All Comments on 'My Fae College Roommate Ch. 04'

I’m enjoying this series. I wish the sex wasn’t so rapid and perfunctory. There is no build up. There is no tension. Okimo is eager to give Cody head (and now he Elvish Ass) any time he wants. He inserts. He cums. So what! Okimo is energized by cum. Is she part Succubus?

Brad is either a good guy, or he’s an extremely rapey douche. My hope is… he’s a good guy, and that he’s bisexual, and eventually interested in Cody too. Yes, including homoerotica in a fantasy fuck story will piss off some readers. But, it will add some real conflict and conflict drives stories.

Great story so far. Feels "real" to have a foreign being who doesn't seem to have the same relationship with sex that humans do. Eager to read more

I’m liking this story quite a bit. Wondering how Okimo will handle the party culture and bustle of a sorority house though.

I’d love to see Cody give Oki a titfuck though. Lovely big breasts, they seem to be made for one!

as a simple bystander more please more if you want i will beg...

I live the alienness of Okimo in this tale. Seyscit apart from other works at literotica.

I hope you continue this story when you are able.