All Comments on 'My father's apprentice Ch. 01'

Rife with inconsistencies and sorely screaming for proper punctuation.

great little story. Make me very curious to see what happens next! I hope you write another chapter.

Possibly I missed it, but I did not see a single fuck dammed word about a thick hairy pussy! I would have rated this one a 1 except it was good enough for a 5! I love hairy pussy, thick hairy pussy, but this story has a lot of potential for future chapters, and I hope there are some! I seriously like your imagination, especially for a first story. Great job! super nice. Yea, you know I would, and I am!

Very hot

Where is the rest pls