All Comments on 'My Favorite Nurse'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Time to check the blood pressure

I'm thinking my blood pressure has dropped. Not much left to pump around as it all went to one location. Enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sorry...

...You need to proof-read this for grammar:

to - too - two

deep breaths, not breathes

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