All Comments on 'My First Cheat'

Still not a writer either. This borders on stupid. And why is it in the LW category?

Nothing to attract any interest

Just another skank wife. Nothing to be proud of.

OK, why stop here? You present a fine start to what could be a really intriguing story, but you only give us the initial setup. Yeah, I see you say there’s more to come, but why not tell a complete story? This is a very short fragment, not long enough to even justify calling it a Part One. Just not cool.

Another idiot who doesn't know the difference between a wife and a girlfriend. Please at least make an effort to appear like you're old enough to be on an adult site.

Childish writing, not erotic in the least. WRONG CATEGORY!

So the poor little anonymous don't think a cheating husband/boyfriend belongs in LW. I guess that is because they can't rag and bloviate with the only two words they know. Cuck and whore.

They ought to be ashamed of themselves, but oh, they already because they don't have the balls to comment under their username

A cheating bastard story.

Well done and great writing.