All Comments on 'My First Lesson'

Liked how you started this short piece with bit of humor. Scenario has potential — two women with controlling, self-serving husbands connect, but it feels just like a scenario/an outline of a plot with promise. The sex was intense, but it too abbreviated. We are given only a glimpse of each character and rushed through their initial connection. Each paragraph could easily morph into more so we as readers get involved/get to know/feel the attraction. I hope you let this short piece serve as an introduction and step back and develop both storyline and characters — so much potential. Thanks for sharing; please continue.

Thank you for your feedback. This was my first Story and i was a bit nervous. Going to work on your suggestion to flesh them out

I agree with the previous comment. This story was quick and dirty, but still enjoyable. Keep writing.

Excellent.

Can not wait for the next part

That was great, now I am wet as hell, waiting for the tongue again. Please come back.