All Comments on 'My First MMF'

I am sure she enjoyed herself, is it hubbies turn next to have a MFF experience?

Kinda believable as a true story. Doesn't score very well as a sexy tale, simply for want of any suspense or salacious details. No human drama. Not even much for the LW snipers to get their dander up over. Maybe you could do well with an Editor if there is a next time. And I do hope there will be one. Keep 'em coming.

You became a member on the 5th and delivered this trash heap on the 8th. Bravo. The story was more a narrative than anything else, no background, no character build up, not even anything sensual for the strokers to call "hot" as they pound their pud. With crap like this you'll be the next writer to ignore. 1*

Way to rushed and lost some of the eroticism. Not a fan of MMF but each to his or her own.

Good representation of really trashy people. 1⭐ - TANSTAAFL

Stupidity runneth amok.

Dialogue. Stories need dialogue, otherwise the reader feels like they're reading a travelogue.

"Wanted, someone to fuck my wife and myself. Must have an erect penis and be willing to fuck strangers." Shouldn't this story be in the Fantasy/Science Fiction category? No one who engages in this behavior is a real human being.

But thanks for the effort.

Damn. Some people are idiots. This person took the time to write a dirty story for us and you guys shit all over it? If you’re looking for classic literature, you’re on the wrong site.

No angst, no cuckold story.

It would have been better if J had a name, even if it was Jay!

Anonymous, damn! I guess most readers don’t care much for dirty cuck stories.

I really enjoyed your story, thankyou.

I ran across one of 26thnc ‘s moronic comments from a 2002 story. He’s been creeping in Loving Wives for over 20 years!

If he hasn’t got a clue yet, he never is going to get one.

I feel sorry for the loser. Nahhhh, no i don’t.

I enjoyed the story and want more from this writer.