by bigbeautiful
Very good but there could have some description of the characters, including yourself.
Being a true story, I suppose that it couldn't be altered. But I got a little lost in the read, Maybe a little more description would have helped.
I'm a big fan of 3 somes, And had 2 myself.
But seeing the girls were afraid to let go, And play with each other as well. I don't beleave there would have been a good story behind them.
I'm happy that you got that 3 some and full filled your fantasy.
May next time don't write the sex...Write a story to go along with it.
I feel your story could have been hotter.
Sexy, Hot tale. You just need to get better quality control for grammar and such. You might want to try using an editor.
It so refreshing to find stories based on fact. I hope you keep writing more.
It so refreshing to find stories based on fact. I hope you keep writing more.
It was so nice to get my first comments! All great so far and I do hope I can continue to post stories you will like and appreciate. I will work on updating my profile as well. This was based on a true story that happened just last week in fact. I am glad you are enjoying it! Bigbeautiful :)
Great story! Hope you really got it this way! Hope you have many more true life adventures just like this one to share with us! I would love to read a little more discription of you in your stories and what they did to explore y our beautiful body!