All Comments on 'My First Time'

by Jamie_Lust_Erotica

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Sparrow69Sparrow69about 2 years ago

Very beautiful story of first love, I hope you consider continuing this; I’d enjoy seeing where your relationships went afterwards… 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Decent plot line, but really in need of some remedial grammar.

KristaMoraneKristaMoranealmost 2 years ago

*****

Sweet and beautiful. I agree with anon about the grammar, though.

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