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Click hereJessica and Tabitha are still talking, but with the distance it is hard. Jessica has been up 3 of the four last weeks though, including that first date. All for now, and as always feel free to write to my e-mail if you want to ask me anything. You are all very sweet and I love the comments you leave.
Love,
Lucy
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI think you should find a way to marry your mother your aunt and your cousin. I believe that is the only way you will ever truly be happy. I also think that you should find a lab that could grow sperm from your mother so that you can have a child with her as a tangible expression of your love together.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI'm sorry, but I didn't get on with this tale at all. The last few pages were leaping about and confusing, like it was a mind dump of ideas. X was with Y and then wanted to be with Z and her boobs were so-o-o big but she didn't do anything yet A was fucking B...it lost the eroticism for me and became like reading a porn version of National Enquirer. Needed tidying up and some flow to it.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoHi, Lucy I really love your story of your life and the love that you have with Jill,Kristen and your mom Patty. I was just wondering if your have every had Monice seduce her daughter ? If so please tell us in a story. I want Monica to have the same love you and your mom share. If, you can get Kristen involved to do it please.
syreatadivaalmost 9 years agoHi, Lucy. When I first saw and read through your series and I have been a follower and lurker of this site for a long time now but just got the courage to be a member, I thought that this couldn't be true and real(lots of trolls on the Net and in the world in general).
But I got more and more interested because for one, I am a lesbian also with a fetish for busty women though the biggest I have been with a girl that coincidentally was the size that you are now when I was in college. Secondly, I am very busty myself and part of a family of busty women so I can relate to that and I have fought some incestuous thoughts also(I have never admitted that until now) and so for your to post your stories or "diary" as one poster said with such honesty and freedom, I have to admit that I am envious.
So I am saying all of this to say keep writing your stories, not just they are erotic and makes girls, like me, pussies' wet(sorry. *sheepish grin*) but because through it, I have seen a journey of a wonderful woman and have made me want to live my life on my terms also.
suziegurlalmost 9 years agoHi Lucy
I love your stories so much they are very erotic and sexy. I look forwrd to reading more of them in the future. They are all so well written and sexy. i Just love all the charaters and your family you life really is awesome.
Lucy_Palmost 9 years agoAuthorWell I had an interesting time on summer break so far so I wrote a little something. It should be up in 2 or 3 days I'm guessing. I'll be super busy the next couple of weeks so might be a while for the next one. Feel free to leave comments and send e-mails though and I will get back to you as soon as I can.
Lucy
Lucy_Palmost 9 years agoAuthor@ the last one:
I feel like I do write about what I am thinking and feeling. I couldn't possibly write about how everyone is feeling, because only they know. I do admit I have strayed to more physical than mental as most of my encounters now aren't as emotional but more of the sexual nature. Now I am not suggestion that I don't care for these people, I do, but I only love Kristen, my mom, and Jill. Though I wonder if we ever really fall out of love. I'll keep in mind what you said.
And thanks to everyone for the e-mails as well. It's always nice to hear kind words.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI have read the stories from the start and they are well written. You cannot always find a new story, because they don't appear at the top of the relevant tag as a new story.
In regard to the stories, if you want constructive feedback, I would say this. Why not just offer a brief summary of anything that has remained the same. And then write a more detailed story of one specific episode that happened. If you mention so many different names, it can get quite confusing. In the latest story, there are several episodes given a brief mention. Also from my personal preference, I want to understand emotions, rather than just the physical sex.
aliasmcnamealmost 9 years agoI suspect that a significant problem with the people who are rating the story lower than it deserves (IMHO) is that they have not read all the way through and they just want a one stop erotic read. I also feel that other writers, who are inventing stories rather than simply documenting what happens in their lives, can keep upping the ante. Poor story-telling is endemic in the erotic genre because people paint themselves into a corner by constantly feeling that they need to go big or go home. Your life is interesting from a human perspective and it incidentally is incredibly sexual because of who you are and how you are living right now. I think that in some ways an erotic story site is not the right place for it because it is more of a blog with a low posting rate.
So to sum up, no, your chapters are not one stop masturbation fodder, because they depend on having a sense of what has happened before. The characters are real and you have to commit to knowing them to get anything out of reading about them. You may have to live with the problem of the whole body of work being exceptional but that because of the emotional value, those looking for fast and furious descriptions will not be altogether happy.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoLucy, to me every one of your stories deserves a 5 star rating. Don't ever stop as I would like to see where you go for many years to come.
