All Comments on 'My First Time Was a Foursome'

by Jimmela

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 14 years ago
Nice story

Four almost life-long friends getting together before they all go to college. The way the relationships develops. I really liked this story.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 14 years ago
Solid debut: very sexy

A familiar scenario, but not so fantastical it loses the attention. Nice characterisation, too, and the dialogue was quite well handled. All in all, I look forward very much to reading many more of your stories.

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