All Comments on 'My First Year in Prison Ch. 18'

Not Xander omg

Well, you certainly know how to tear the heart out of someone. I knew when Xander started walking toward Kim it would end like this, but I hoped it wouldn't. I think this is probably the saddest chapter you've ever written for Tyler. I'm still wiping away tears as I write this. I'm ready for this story to end! MLF

Tragically emotional chapter! So well written I couldn't turn away. Poor Xander :(

So emotional! You are an amazing writer

This is tragic. I’m anxious to know who else was killed. Xander’s death is very hard to take. I fear Ray, Trevor, Will, Ralph, Bianchi, and Kim, as well as Romano (or maybe Foster) will be part of that seven. So very sad. I don’t see how Ty’s relationship with Will could have actually contributed to this (besides maybe adding to Ray’s rage), but Ty will no doubt be drowned in guilt.

Not Xander. Well written had me on the edge of my seat.

You are so talented. Felt like I was reading a real novel.

I have read the last paragraph over 10 times and I still can't believe it. Poor Xander. Beautifully written. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh Dammit!!! My stomach hurts, not Xan!!!!

It was very good, and very sad. No sex, but very exciting and upsetting. Poor Xander! I really liked him, but as they say, "The good always leave first."