All Comments on 'My Fortieth Birthday'

I wish I was 40 or 50 or even 60!

5

Great job, Trionyx. It's well written, it's a great April Fool's trick, and it does a nice job describing the thoughts as one approaches one of those big 0-birthdays but this time with several big Os! Best wishes in the contest.

Oh, how I would like to be that young and have such a loving wife!

WOW - ditto to Boyd Percy. A dream come true for most men and hot enough to get a rise out or a very old man. And refreshing with no super large tits or cocks. I will be sure to read the rest of your stories.

Really happy birthday. 5 Stars well earned. Hope you make a good place in the contest

Wish my wife had read this when I turned 40! Well done!

Cheers

SAGE

A rather disappointing story. It was his birthday, but his wife clearly got the "gift" for herself rather than him. I'm glad he eventually convinced her to untie him so could enjoy his wife's lover a bit instead of just being expected to service her and that Tina actually gave him some attention while his wife was sleeping.

I am curious if she is already having an ongoing lesbian affair or if this was to gauge his acceptance of her intended cheating.

Decent story spoiled by errors. 'artistic flare'? Try 'artistic flair'. 'Sight' and' site' have different meanings. You use the wrong one.

A very different birthday present!

The errors have already been pointed out, otherwise well written.

Nicely written and erotic description of a perfect birthday present. The errors were really minor, and how anyone could find this a disappointing story (or present), I can’t imagine.

I'm with Boyd Percy. Really nice story, sounds like the two might have discussed a fantasy at some time. I know I would have liked to lived out one like that. Sounds like Suzanne put her twist on it for hubby.

PERFECT!!!

i got 80 and like to do this twice..great