All Comments on 'My Heart Can't Tell You 'No' Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very good

Good read. I loved the interactions between them. Specially "The Bitch" poor Ryan. Looking forward to chapter 02. I like Darcy.

2 stars

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CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker60about 5 years ago
Reminds me of a poker player.

He's going all in trying for a straight flush with a eight high hand of nothing. At least emotionally. Too bad we can't learn the lessons our parents taught us. Be with someone who WANTS to be with you. You can never make someone love you.

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Just a guy who started writing as a release. Liked to read stories here and thought I would add my 2 cents. Some stories are real and mine and some are real and belong to others, and some are just made up while driving. Hope you enjoy.