All Comments on 'My Honey's a Vampire'

But needs editing and fleshing out.

Reads like old man looking for fond memories. If that is what you wanted then it’s good. It’s bland, no excitement or joy. Thanks for writing.

"The second I saw us becoming infatuated with each other I should have let you know before it could develop into love. Now we're hopelessly hooked on each other with no way out." What a manipulative cheeky devil our vamp is.

She is playing the long game. Has a person told you "Please don't fall in love with me" & proceeds to instead? Lol, that's what our lil'goth vamp is.

I adore these absolutely thrashy monster flicks ... 5*