by Redhotsexylovemachine
Yet another example of this writer's gift of grouping paragraphs together in a story that doesn't hasn't lost its way
through the chapters. The chapters themselves are delightfully 'medium' size in length (that's really nice!). But collectively, they stay true to the original story line. The story has stayed smooth and interesting (and, yes... 'fun' to read). So, please don't stop now. Oh, and please consider any and all of my comments as encouragement to continue on with your imaginative thoughts (hmmm... they are just from your imagination, right?) Anyway, great work! I am very much looking forward to a lot more of your work.
- To the author... Florida wishes you well.