All Comments on 'My Intro to CFNM'

We need a separate category for all the CFNM freaks.

Nive premise.

But needed much more in the way of extensive details. For example, when he first puts his mouth on her pussy there could/should have been dialog about each was enjoying it. And some instructions/directions about how she wanted him to proceed.

All sex was rushed.

When she began to play with his asshole, it should have gone on longer -- even if he ultimately rejected her finger.

And you could use an editor/proofreader.

You wrote: "The office I worked in was about a three-minute work to the river." You meant WALK, not Work.

You wrote: "So, I have a preposition for you." You meant PROPOSITION, not Preposition.

Four stars.

Nice content, badly in need of an editor.

He should have to work naked with the women watching

I do agree with one of the previous comments, we do need a separate CFNM category! I would devour every entry! Favorite fantasy is to roam around totally naked with a group of appreciative clothed females. Being groped and teased at their leisure and pleasure. Sort of as your story suggests.

Loved the premise and execution of this story. I will read the other two entries you currently have published and hope to see more.

Cheers

SAGE

PS: You have another follower! Also please note all your negative critics are anonymous!

One and done ? What didn't happen to the two weeks ? Thanks for introducing use to the new cock, hard again so soon. I wish I could even remember when that could happen.