All Comments on 'My Late Night Subway Ride'

Homeless guys have all the luck!

It's a good start at a story, but there are some flaws here.

It's hard to buy a story some woman spends an hour getting ready to go out clubbing and then suddenly "realizes" what she's wearing. When you're dressed like that, you don't really forget.

Also, I'd like to see a little more emotion and inner world in a story that claims to be a female point of view. It's a little too anatomical and mechanical. What is she thinking, how does his gaze make her feel? Why did she start doing what she did with this homeless guy? Is she lonely? Getting revenge on some guy? Insecure?

It's a great scenario, but you could use a little work on creating a believable female voice.

That was a fun and interesting story...enjoyed it. : )

Deliciously hot story! Would love to read more of what your sexy mind comes up with!

please write a sequal. i want to read about her servicing the men.

I agree--please write a sequel. Homeless sex is a major turn-on