All Comments on 'My Lovestory'

Loved it! Hoping for a second Chapter

Second chapter please

Nice story. Can't wait for more.

suite

great plus please too short story

Was this translated , from another language ? I gave up , halfway through .

Superbe y aura-t-il une suite ?

Second chapter

From the middle it was like you were in a hurry. All the buildup you brought into the story just flew away in the last lines.

Hello the story is too condensed it must be detailed write it in several chapters, but I want a continuation

Too bad there won't be a sequel

Not bad, but nit great. Got a few grammar issues with verb tenses