All Comments on 'My Marriage'

Could have been a good story, the jumping back and forth between characters was distracting and even got lost at one point with the narration changing viewpoints. Not a good method or technique. What's worse is the way you handled the end of the story. The letter was a good idea but kind of said the same thing, no real information there . Don't know why she would 'get it' after that but not before . Could have been a four, but the end dropped it to a 2, and that's being generous. No accountability on the scumbag predator? What's wrong with you? If you're going to be a writer, take a stand for something. Do something that's going to enhance our civilization and our culture. You let the idiot go on and do it to some other unsuspecting couple, and the silliness about him getting therapy in the end was just a waste - no reason he would do that, he's had no cause for a change of heart. And at the bottom of all this are the heart problems. Her selfishness, and the scumbag's ugly narcissism.

No retribution, no justice.

No justice, no peace.