All Comments on 'My Meeting'

Meh.

JPB

Two stars for a really lame story.

JKB

This does beg for a second part.

This story does not have an ending; it just stops. Without a part 2, I just wasted my time reading it.

Thank you for sharing your stories with us, but you really need to work on your endings. On each of the stories I've read so far, your ending lets the rest of the story down.

Firstly, you need an editor or at the very least proof read your stories after you have let them sit for a few days to allow you to actually read what you wrote, not what you believe you wrote. Secondly, this, like other of your stories, does not flow well or have any sort of conclusion that provides satisfaction or closure. You seem to make jumps that have no logic or purpose, for example calling your lawyer your “assistant”! Why?

whatever...

Five stars.

Quite appropriate for the scumbag predator, maybe not enough for the company and relative. Certainly not enough on the so-called 'wife.'

Another “poor victim hubby” rises up and righteously destroys his oppressors in an orgy of perfectly legal violence. Of course the police would never get involved when smashing the fingers of a businessman in his own office. He fucked the guy’s wife, so that makes it legal, right?

Not worth the effort to read.

Needs a part 2.

Only half a story. Without any resolution, it is unsatisfying. if you're going to write, write a complete story, don't leave it for your readers to imagine what happens next.

Ignore shadracht. This is a perfectly fine way to end a short story. 5 stars.

What a shame it ended there.

There was so much more to explore.

Oh well!!!!!

Scores 4/5, the rushed finish cost u a point.

Even in 1955 "bosses" couldn't bed their employees. This is an incredibly stupid plot. Perhaps with some subtlety it could be believable, but these silly writers deal only in hyperbole, cliche and stereotypes.