All Comments on 'My Mermaid'

You really have a way with words. And it appears from the hardon I'm sporting that right now, that you know just how to use those words. I like that, a lot, A LOT!!!!! Thanks.

I liked your story. It was titillating. Please write more. Good job!

I rarely see on Literotica such a interesting novel-like level of English. For example I rarely see (beyond classic literature) the usage of nominal sentences (sentences without a finite verb), sentence fragments and equvalents. I'm not a native English speaker, but I still enjoy seeing a more bold use of artistic/stylistic means of expression ;) So 5 stars from me!

Hot. Will they meet up again as James will be there for many days? They both seem intensely attracted to each other. I’d love to see them flip fuck.

Thanks guys for the accolade. I like to write and it makes me even happier when I can elicit some nice (hard) reaction from my readers. I wouldn't dare to claim that I am writing literature, but I believe in error-free writing. Makes me proud.

Thanks again and I will be posting more stories soon.

Simon

I re read your story and it still turned me on. Cum everywhere. Loved it.xx