All Comments on 'My Mom and the Goblin King Ch. 02'

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Realdeal123Realdeal123over 2 years ago

Okay, I am disappointed at how this story progress.

FrostLayerFrostLayerover 2 years agoAuthor

@Realdeal123 Could you elaborate further? I’m curious what changed between parts 1 and 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My 2 cents

Love that you are developing the characters along with the story. 5/5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can I draw fanart?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Mention how the mom becomes a slut and she shows hate towards her son and that's she want to be bred to a strong offspring

FrostLayerFrostLayerover 2 years agoAuthor

To the anon asking about fan art, absolutely! Contact me if you end up making it.

ForTheCeasarForTheCeasarover 2 years ago

Excellent chapter looking forward to the next one. Keep it up.

niggaplz101niggaplz101over 2 years ago

This was awesome! I think spent a lot of time with Alex and not his mom tho. I Know it’s from Alex’s pov, but I’d like his mom to be present for most of the story, and bring as debacherous as possible!

IronWill_IronWill_over 2 years ago

This story series is so HOT! I love the concept of a hot mom cuckolding her son with non-humans. Usually, in this story concept, you see either a mother cuckolding her son with his bully or interracial but interspecies just makes it so much more arousing. When does the hot mom become pregnant and is it Stordo's or the troll's baby? Does she also fuck Grimm and all the other monsters in the inn? Please continue and I can't wait for Chapter 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Did you ever get the fanart, I sent it but I am unsure whether or not you received it?

mitchawamitchawaover 2 years ago

It's sci-fi, so size does matter, but the fucking seemed to be too much. Still a well-written story, with a great deal of exaggeration.

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