All Comments on 'My Mom Has No Choice Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I dig the dynamic. But 1 thing, ya know, a story can be more than 1 page long right? A few grammatical errors but nothing major, mostly typos. Keep it up, you're doin aiight!

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

A bit rough, but good!

tongueman53tongueman53about 1 year ago

That is so Hot , for him to have that kind of Power over his own Mother. I can only imagine the fun they will be having as the story goes on.

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Short intro to any readers of my stories. If you’re looking for the grammatically correct, perfect punctuation, no spelling errors and/or the full story experience you will not find it in my stories. I don’t write this shit to be graded as in an English Lit class. For g...

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