All Comments on 'My Mom - My Lover Ch. 11'

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TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
Very well done!

And very yummy too! I like that this whole experience took them to another level! I can't wait to see where it leads! Thank you!

ju8streadingju8streadingover 4 years ago

i am not into the master and slave thing. him protecting his mom, i just had to read this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Husband

Where is dena's husband

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another good chapter!

I’m not really into violence but I do agree with protecting the innocent.

Maybe in the future chapters, Brady can tattoo or use piercings to further claim his sluts? Brady could also add other family members to his collection of sluts?

Please keep adding to Brady and his sluts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
need a new chapter

if only his dena could get her tube;s undone so that she can get pregnate

and also jean.

SAV12SAV12over 4 years ago
A REALLY VERY GOOD STORY

I LOVE A STORY THAT'S WELL THOUGHT OUT AND PUT TO PAPER. I'M NOT INTO THIS MASTER AND SLAVE RELATIONSHIP EVEN THOUGH IT'S SORT OF SOFTCORE. I SEE IT AS A SYMBIOTIC RELATIONSHIP WHERE THE SISTERS HAVE A STRONG DESIRE TO BE LOVED BY A TAKE CHARGE KIND OF MAN. THAT MAN JUST HAPPENED TO BE THEIR NEPHEW/SON AND IT WORKS JUST FINE THAT WAY. THE HUMOR, LUST, AND LOVE ALL WORK. EVEN THE DRAMA WITH TOM AND HIS SUBSEQUENT BEATING STILL FITS THE NARRATIVE. YOU PROTECT THE ONES YOU TRULY LOVE, NO MATTER WHAT. THAT'S WHY JEAN TOOK HER PUNISHMENT WITH DENA. JEAN REALIZED SHE WAS JUST AS GUILTY AS DENA AND HER LOVE FOR HER SISTER WOULD NOT ALLOW HER TO ADMINISTER DENA'S SPANKINGS. NOW LET'S SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN JOHN COMES HOME AND THE BROTHERS FIND OUT. LET'S KEEP THIS STORY GOING AND BRAVO TO THE AUTHOR SO FAR.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Why did you stop?

I have really been enjoying these stories. It seems like you have much more in mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Could have been 5 star

4 star for the way whole Tom scenario was dealt. Also it could have been nice if dena would have been punished a little more.

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