All Comments on 'My Name is Raquel Ch. 01'

Please continue the story. I would really like to see where it goes. Thanks for the read.

Very interesting situation - pacing could be slowed down just a tiny bit but lovely just as is. I look forward very much to the next chapter.

xoxo,

Di

@DianeRedFern,

Thanks for the kind words and the constructive criticism. I’ll try to slow it down. My background is in a technical field, so fictional prose is very difficult for my left-brained self.

Thank you, too, @BarefootCleric. As I indicate in my profile, I’ve been writing Raquel’s stories in my mind for quite some time and just decided to start publishing. Stay tuned.

Raquels_Panties, this longtime PantyBoi is simply agog with ur erotic thread. Luvly writing style, characters, pace and storyline. Christine luvs to "edge" in hur frilly lingerie (YESSS, VS Thongs, Cheekinis, Bikinis👙and Bras) I started wearing decades ago with my younger Sisters' nylon bikini underwear. I luv💋👅 to taste that delicious wet fabric of my soaked dainties............. xoxoxo

Loved your story, we've all been to similar sexy places, some for real some just a fantasy.

You can borrow some of mine anytime. X

@CDsuzie69, thanks!