All Comments on 'My Neighbor Lauren'

I sure hope so!

hot story, did she see him or not?

you have captured realistic and plausible emotions and interactions very well. Hot read, looking forward to a continuation.

Very nice please continue

Good stuff.please have a continuation.looking forward to it

It's killin' me here. You can't do stuff like that and just leave me (the reader) hanging... If there is no sequel, I am going to hound you by sending you a PM every day asking you, "Who's Jason? Who's Jason? Who's Jason???" *grins*

Think carefully if you would rather invest time and effort in a continued story, or utilize your "ignore" feature.

P.S. I could always create an ALT just to ask... WHO'S JASON?!?" :D

Obviously, I want to read more. ;)

Well-written and very sexy. Not finding out who Jason was a buzzkill though.

This was a trip through the mind of an immature guy being very immature. Not enjoyable.

This coulda been the winner for the contest but it seems you rushed this story, it was well thought, but not finished. The two characters should have gotten to do more with Lauren instead of jack off to her.

You've got a pretty noticeable grammar error early on "At six foot one, Tyler was a little taller than I" should be "taller than me."

The story itself is well written and paced, but as other commenters have pointed out, the ending is rather anti-climactic. I love the sexy description of Lauren. I wish she had a bigger part in the story! 4/5

Hope there is a second part

This has become one of my favorite stories. I sure wish there was a sequel but it's superb in its own right. The dialogue and thoughts are pitch-perfect. And Lauren is truly awesome.