All Comments on 'My New Life Ch. 13'

I did a bit better with errors this time but still need some corrections.

I have uploaded the edited version.

Anxiously awaiting the next episode!

Good story.

Two minor spelling corrections to help your editing:

Herd not heard for the group of cows

Chameleon not camillion

Have driven through that area for years since my college days North of there....nice local color

in spite of the spelling an grammatical errors. You really need a proof writer. Badly in need. The sex isn;t that great but with the story development it is not a problem.

Just Painful To Read with the 6th grade spelling.

Please, use a spell and grammar checker

"by Anonymous

12/27/19

Great story . . . .

in spite of the spelling an grammatical errors. You really need a proof writer. Badly in need. The sex isn;t that great but with the story development it is not a problem.

Just Painful To Read with the 6th grade spelling.

Please, use a spell and grammar checker"

Yes, it's so easy to criticize, for those who are so perfect:

in spite of the spelling AND grammatical errors.

The sex ISN'T that great

Found this story just a few days ago and am getting through it and I am enjoying it. While it needs some corrections for spelling and grammar, that is life. Keep up the good work, I'm one that enjoys long novels so keep going for as long as you can. The one item you need to look out for is your and you're. Lots of "your" where it should be you're or "you are" but I'm less of a spelling/grammar nazi than some people are.

I'm working on my own story that covers 30 years and reading different series and seeing how they handle timelines is interesting and helping me shape my own story. Thanks for your story, I appreciate it.

1, Too much sex at the cost of moving the story forward.

2, The spelling issues will eventually stop me reading this, story.

3, The writer just isn’t listening to any constructive criticism - from dozens of people. You sir, make commenting worthless, some of us try really hard to give constructive advice and/or criticism, it’s mostly well received and helps writers improve, but not always. Regards, Ppfzz.