All Comments on 'My New Neighbors Pt. 02'

by flashgordon562006

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BrokenLance13BrokenLance13over 4 years ago
No brainer

It really is a no brainer that you continue this story line. The possibilities for Jo’s sexcapades are endless! With the the things she has done so far ( saffic sex, 3 and 4somes, dp, watersports mmm) how far will she go? Air tight? Woo woo pull a train? Centrepiece at the nudist Resort orgy? Jo and Maggy involved in all girl strapon fun with new friends? After all, she is starting a new life and can be anything she wants.

Oh gawd yes please continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

I have really enjoyed your story so far and I hope there will be additional chapters. You have endless possibilities to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
POV

Occasionally you slip from first person to third person. Not hard to figure out but it distracts from the possibility and the fun that the reader is the narrator.

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