All Comments on 'My New Place Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
brilliant

really hot story, its made me very wet

willrosewillroseover 11 years ago
Less is more

No messin', no jivin', just business! Loved it. What a great fantasy.

DaleFeathersDaleFeathersover 10 years ago
Nice

I especially liked that Mrs Alexander answered the phone, that you essentially lied to her so that you could seduce her son. I can only imagine that she would not like that!

Interesting how you are aggressive in acting out your desires but only towards the end of placing yourself in a submissive position.

I also liked your break in the action when after returning from the bathroom you think you your boy has left. Maybe a little more internal dialogue about that … just frustration and confusion … not a bit of anger?

Nice action in the hallway, nice thrust and pump, both sides. Liked you reflective thoughts during the action and then you encouragement “"Yeah baby, fill up your hot tease of a neighbor! Show me what you've wanted to do for so long!"

Will read more.

Mr Feathers

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