All Comments on 'My New Place Ch. 05'

Very good story, wish they would be longer but you definitely are starting to capture the 'moment' so cannot wait for the next in the series! Good job!

Your protagonist is quite the saucy show-off.

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Please make your stories more vivid by adding detail, both psychological and physical.

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I wish she had bartered with the voyeurs: she could have played "I'll show you mine if you show me yours".

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Thanks for your story.