All Comments on 'My Night with the Internet Star Pt. 03'

Love these two together and eager to read more about them in the next chapter!

I think you’re a good writer, but perhaps you might want to look into getting an editor? As I read through your chapters, I noticed a number of typos and editing related errors (e.g, I can tell that an earlier draft was written in third person). They’re not a big deal, but are things that a second set of eyes - someone not as close to the story - might have an easier time catching. But, again, you ARE a good writer and storyteller. 🙂

I love this series! Wish I could see the YouTube vid that got you hooked in the first place. Thank you so much for writing!!