All Comments on 'My Own Turkish Delight'

All caps is poor wordcraft. You can display excitement without it.

Something new would be better, rather than recycled and simple stories. Read up on stories on here like Prototype and Power of Persuasion. Then add your spin and perhaps use another type of person other than "dirty old man" I think what you write has potential but it could use some New spark and some complexity. No more mcstory recycles.

Love it. More, please.

Love reading your stuff - this one is great. Nice mixture of humor and lots of sex!

Can I borrow your genie?

You know there's a girl...