All Comments on 'My Petite Fiancée Surprises Me Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Great writing, I love this story. Hot and wholesome. Now, that date would't be with our hero, now would it?

NewGuy2022NewGuy20226 months agoAuthor

THanks for writing, it really makes posting these worth while when someone appreciates your work. I promise, the next story is already written and submitted but you wouldn't really want me to give anything away would you?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Thank you for writing this series. Great build-up and dialogue, and the sisters are both hot! Keep up the good work!

NewGuy2022NewGuy20226 months agoAuthor

Thanks so much! I love feedback. I've gotten some suggestions. I don't keep all of them up. I'm going to try one of those suggestions in the story after my next posting. Hopefully people will like the slight shift in direction. I love the constructive feedback, particularly when it nicely asks me to add a feature or remove a character.

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