All Comments on 'My Punishment.'

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chytownchytownabout 7 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Total garbage

Given your description, she tore his sphincter muscle to shreds. He would have been bleeding and needed surgery. He got loose and went to the hospital. He got surgery. He got the damage documented. including the abrasions from being tied and the bruising and bleeding from being whipped. She went to prison - for years. He found another girlfriend. What a bitch. She was lucky when she sat on his face that he didn't bite her clit off or when he got loose he didn't beat her to a pulp. Ugly story of abuse. No way does their relationship continue. He could never go to sleep in the same bed with her. He might wake up dickless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Another .....

Silly story .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Oh dear

Absolute garbage.

Terribly written with poor grammar.

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Rob, a retired professional guy who is married, a carer for my wife, so my writing tends to be cathartic. Some of my stories have a wild taste of fantasy, some are based on experience, but the writing helps me. I appreciate many readers are from 'across the pond,' and culture,...

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