All Comments on 'My Punishment'

Good start do write more.

just leave the house, go to the police, and claim sexual abuse by the father.

This story was well written, and the idea was ok, but it didn’t hold together. An 18 year old girl masturbates, and her father locks her up? I suppose there are fathers who would, but why would she not just walk out and go to the police ?

Re: Anonymous,

I though he was reacting to her chatting up the new librarian, not masturbating.