All Comments on 'My Return'

by Kryptonite

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
'forhereyesonly'

This is amazing, it turned me on so much and its everything i cud of wanted. Amazing story, amazing guy and i bet an incredible fuck. I would really like to act this story out with my guy. Keep up the fantastic work, your an amazing writer and shoud never give up on it, keep pushing with everything. I know i would personally like to read a lot more of your work, and im sure the rest of your public audience would as well. keep working on those novels and if you run out of steam then im sure theres a good friend that will push you to keep going that offeres support, praise and encouragment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful

This has to be one of if not the best story I have ever read on this website. I just loved the style that you used and how to took the time to describe everything.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You are SO talented

Absolutely loved the story, and I'm sure whichever girl you wrote it about thought so too ;) I bet she's a lucky girl to have such a talented guy, and i bet she wishes you'd write more of them ;) ;) cole

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The only thing wrong with this beautifully written romance story is its brevity.

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