All Comments on 'My Revenge Plan Pt. 05'

I just read all 5 chapters, man that was great! 5 stars on all.

The end got a bit weird with the boyfriend being there. It would have been better if he would have knocked the mother, daughter up and had them move in with him, while his brother ditched the wayward wife and the bastard child because it was always a constant reminder of his brother's revenge.

Not bad, actually as a whole it was great. But it ended with more of a dull thud than a bang. 5/5 stars just for the series.

Dewey Cheatham

Nice story all round. AAAAAA++++++

What a great story.

Really enjoyed it

Would love too read more if you xould find the time too write more.

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